3/31/09
Dear Zeus,
I know how difficult it can be to find somebody to take over for your magnificent greedy brother Poseidon, but I think I know just the right god that fits most of his descriptions and loves the ocean. Me. I love all the interesting creatures that lurk at the bottom of the deep blue sea and the ones that glide through the coral reefs. That's why I think I am the perfect substitute for Poseidon.
One of the many reasons that I should be the sub for Poseidon is because I love the animals that lodge under the sea. My favorite sea creature is the Goblin shark. This deadly animal dwells at the bottom of the sea and has a horn above his mouth. I also love the astonishing sea creatures that coast around drop offs and reefs like the clown fish. These two types of are not the only fish I like but the top two out of every fish in the sea. I love every fish in the sea because of their different adaptations.
I love the ocean itself not because it's 70% of the earth but because it is more unique then people think. It can cause the deadliest Tsunamis like the December 26 Sumatra Tsunami. If I were to control the remarkable sea I would inform people on how to keep the ocean clean and punish those who litter into the ocean.
I also lobster sometimes with my dad and I fish a lot too so I have some experience with the ocean. I never abuse fish after catching it unless I am keeping it then you have to put it out of its misery. Also I never rip the hook out of the fish's mouth like some people.
These are some of the many reasons why I should be the sub for your magnificent brother Poseidon and take over his exiting job for a year.
From your friend,
SEAN
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
9 comments:
This is a very nice letter Sean!!!!!!!!!
Nice beginning Sean. Great middle and end to!!! I like the structure of your letter. I felt that you meant every word and every word was the truth. FROM
T.L.R
This is a beautiful letter. I love how you said that if you were Poseidon, you would inform people on how to keep the ocean clean. I love it.
Your Friend,
SN
nice letter Everything you said was true. K.P.
Sean I like your connections to science-70% water and tsunamis. I didn't know about the Goblin shark.
Nice job!
Mrs. Gurnee
sean It looks like you put alot pf time and effert into this letter A.s
Sean, your opening paragraph was very well written, and was very descriptive. I love your facts and details in paragraph two, they were very convincing. I liked when you said, "I love every fish in the sea because of their different adaptations." Also, I Like the facts you used in paragraph three, they made your letter even more persuasive. Great job!!!
-SNM
Sean if it were up to me you would have that so fast that your head would spin. It was really amazing, I kind of wish that I could write that good.
from,
C.G.H
Sean.....
Like T.L.R. said i thought your letter was very believable. I also thought that in your third paragraph you had great details about the tsunamis.
-morrigan:)
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