April 1 2009
Dear Zeus
I bet it is hard to replace your brother Poseidon. He always could do what's best for the sea. I want to tell you that I want to replace Poseidon because he is a great person and he created many
sea creatures. I love sea creatures like sharks, fish, whales, and dolphins. Poseidon loves to swim and he swims all the time. I love to swim and I am on the swim team. I swim 5 days a week. Poseidon created the sea and is the god of the sea. I like the sea and all of its qualities. Without the sea we would not be living at all.
Some of the other people who want to replace Poseidon said that I’m nothing like your brother and I won't get the job. I hope I convinced you that I want the job. I will accept your choice for the job. Thank you for your time to read my argument to prove why I should replace your brother Poseidon.
Taylor
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
4 comments:
You sound like your a great fit for the job. K.P.
I like your connection to the swim team. I also like your last sentence thanking the readers for reading your essy.
Mrs. Gurnee
You had many facts and details that made your letter so convincing. Great job!!!
-SNM
Taylor.....
Your letter was very convincing. Especially when you were talking about how you were on the swim team. That really persuaded me!
I think you would make an awesome Posedion!!!
-morrigan:)
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