Monday, June 1, 2009

Anthony

Step falls
My favorite place in the whole wide world
near Bethel
off a dirt road
that’s the entrance.

As you climb you are in the deep Maine woods
full of the smell
of fresh pine
decaying leaves
musty air
damp environment.

Waterfalls
the closer we get
the more they echo in our ears even louder
boulders cutting down the mountain
water pooling down
faster and faster
till it hits the ground.

Step falls
like Fun Town- Splash Town only natural
waterfalls
rock slides
deep pools
kids paradise
step falls!

Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Kyle

Lake Pemaquid

The smell of pine,
Like a Fall afternoon,
At the campsite,
Set up our tent,
Then eat lunch.

Later that day,
My father and I,
Take a boat,
To the deep, blue lake,
To fish.

As we give up,
Something happens,
Something exciting,
Something great,
I get a bite.

He put up a fight,
He wouldn't give up,
But eventually,
I got him!

I stay at the lake,
For three weeks,
Always savoring,
Each day.

I'm coming back,
To the lake,
This summer,
I can't wait!

Lillian

Sebago Lake State Park

Camping.
The Penny candy store
laffy taffy
skittles
razzles
all for pennies
out of my pocket.

Tubing
gliding across
the water

Feeling sand on
the beach
in between my toes

Smelling the BBQ's

Swinging on the swings
Swinging
High feeling the breeze go through my
Hair almost like I’m flying.

This is why I like going to
Sebago Lake State Park.

Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Sarah

My Favorite Place

Camp
my favorite place
my get-away
my life
Camp
We go there in the summer
to wakeboard
to relax
to have fun
Camp

My camp is on
Watchic Lake
with a field
that stretches all the way to the road
with the smell of pine-needles
and sap everywhere you go
with fun around every corner

The color the ocean turns when a storm
is about to hit
is the color of my camp
with a porch across the front
two stories high
and a dock with our
boat-
that we couldn't live without

The setting sun
The fish
The gardens
The beauties of my camp
The things I look forward to seeing

When the water is
smooth we go wakeboarding
kneeboarding
skiing
surfing
When the water is rough we go tubing
jet-skiing
And when the water is in between we go swimming
Listen
You can hear the waves
breaking
against the rocksthe boats speeding by
the birds chirping in the trees
that cover the lake like
a canopy
Look
You can see the islands
the swamp
the wildlife
Touch
You can feel the soft grass
under your feet
the wind blowing from across the lake
the sun beating down on your skin
Smell
The scent of the musty swamp
the trees
the outdoors
Enjoy
You can relish the water sports
the games
But most of all
the
FUN

Chandler

Six Flags

The best place I have ever been to
is six flags
They have a roller coaster
called the

Superman

I did not go on the ride because I was a little scared
of how high it was
The roller coaster had 5 separate coasters and
they all were red
and blue

All 5 coasters had a red cape on the back of each one
with a warning sign on the back
of it

Six Flags

Taylor

Yankee Stadium

Feeling
When you walk in it's like magic.
It's like boom, the smell of hot dogs
And peanuts.
It was not like any ballpark.
It was Yankee Stadium.
This was not a dream.
It was more.

The Game
Every crack of the bat was like
Music. The people around me
were from different states.
They came just to see a game.

Memories
When I left I thought back to
Reality. Also I left with memories.
Like the final score 8 – 2.
My favorite player hitting a home run,
But most of all I went to the game.

Gone
Now Yankee Stadium is gone.
The last game there was a special one.
The Yankees won on a special night
That celebrates their history.

Sophia

My Favorite Place

The Beach.
At the beach
I love swimming
I love laying
in the hot sun
listening to my
I-pod.

The way I feel
at the beach is
happy.

I smell salt water
all around me and
sand everywhere.

When I'm swimming
the waves are my
favorite activity to
do in the water.

It is fun
going under the waves.
It makes me feel
almost as happy as the day
my nephew was born.

Cassandra

My Favorite Place

Disney World
is like a
dream
the pool at my hotel
is like the shape of
a guitar.

At Disney World
there are
fast rides
the Rockin' Roller Coaster
Tower of Terror
Test Track.

They are awesome and scary
They go so fast.
I feel excited.

I want to go back
someday
to Disney World.

Morrigan

In The Woods

In the woods,
During Autumn,
my favorite place.

The
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
leaves
Like confetti at a birthday party.
All over the trees
and the ground
there is

Red
Brown
Orange
Yellow

My favorite place

The birds singing,
The squirrels scampering,
The mosquitoes sucking your blood

My favorite place

The hard ground
beneath
your feet

Then.
Rain.
Mud.
Mushy Mushy Mud.
soaking through your shoes
and socks

Rain.
Mud.
Trees.
Leaves.

The Woods

My Favorite Place

Milos

Smiling Hill Farms

One of my favorite
places in Maine is a place
called
Smiling Hill Farms.

It is an ice cream
place
in Westbrook
or Scarbrough,
I can't remember exactly.

My favorite place has
a lot of farm animals like
geese
pigs
horses,
and goats.

My favorite place has ice cream
it is so good!
cotton candy
mocha chip,
vanilla
chocolate
and mint.

but my favorite
is the cotton candy.

Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Kevin

Northern Maine

Trees as far as the eye
can see,
green like
Easter grass.
Maple,
pine and
oak trees
everywhere.

My nose
is clogged with the smell of balsam.
Tons of
moose,
deer,
and chipmunks.
cool crisp breeze
rustling through
the bright green
maple leaves
Northern Maine

Sean

Boston

The most wonderful place in New England
Boston.
The Red Sox Stadium
the scent of the hot dogs
pulls you closer and closer
the delicious 8 inch
hot dogs
taste better
than the hot dogs from home.

Then, once the game
starts
the rumbling of the
crowd begins,
and by the 6th inning
I can already taste
the fresh breath of
a win.

After the game
it takes almost
forever to get to the T.

Once we get on the T it feels like it only takes
1 second
to get back to the train station
Here we catch our train home
to Portland.

Jema

My Favorite Place

My cousin's house
near the woods
the smell of pine surrounds it like clouds surround the sun
light blue with black shutters

My cousin's their names are Macey and Morgan
when I go there I like to hang out with Morgan
my mom says Morgan and I are like two peas in a pod
Macey play with my little sister Bryanna

My cousin's house
out in Limington,the country
where my mom and her two brothers grew up

My cousin's house
the cousins which I know
best out of all I have
the ones who I can't forget
the best cousins
I could ever ask for

Gabriel

My Favorite Place

My favorite place
is a park in Florida.

My favorite place
is where I first
learned
to walk.
Close to the
ocean that looked like
the cloudless sky.

My favorite place
has amazing sunflowers,
roses,
and an amazing pond.

My favorite place has
grass
the shade of emerald green

My favorite place has
butterflies the colors of
orange, blue, yellow
and even purple

My favorite place
A park in Florida

Brittanie

Kentucky

The fields are covered in golden wheat
and corn stocks
The leaves
are razor sharp
Corn fields are so long
like a blanket across the fields.

Lakes
something great about Kentucky
is the canoeing
swimming snorkeling
never ending fun.

Cow ants
Black and orange like Halloween
vibrating in you hand
As big as a quarter
Harmless yet so deadly.

Shallon

Florida

Ahh, the fresh Linen smell of Florida
Miles of awesomeness every where you go
Palm Trees in sight
Memories have begun.

Beaches
Sand slithering between your toes
Splashing in the water
Can this get any better?

The Amusement parks
Sea-World, Universal, Islands of Adventure, Congo River
And seeing the sun settling
Seeing the Stars at night when you leave.

The Smell of a fresh grilled steak at a restaurant at night.
hearing the jazz music
Watching sports on the TV
just awesome.

Seeing family.
Hanging with my cousin Bobbi
Staying up till 5 in the morning
Drinking Kool-Aid
So much fun!

Leaving.
upsetting.
disappointing.
Makes me want to
Scream
At
The
World.

Well,
I'll just wait till next year!

-Shallon

Trenton

Chebeague Island

The land of relaxation
Huge trees, Small trees
swaying
in the ocean breeze

Pine, Oak, Maple, Birch
are some
of the trees living on this
ocean perch

The ocean swells and sails
on one of its many gales
this helps me see
this is the place to
Be

Miles of wooded island, low cut grass
white pine house
Black shuddered windows
This is the place to
Be

Two skylights look up high
letting in the light of
the cloudless sky
this is the place to
Be

This is my house
on this island
And out of all the world's
space
this
is my favorite
place

Tai

The Island

One of my favorite places is next to an island
in the Pacific ocean in Mexico
with hundreds of colorful fish
many giant starfish
lots of stingrays
cruising along the ocean depth.

Divers deep down under the water with little
schools of fish cruising along near them.
The giant starfish were indigo with orange spikes
there were sunfish with yellow stripes.

And there was a sea-lion who was doing poses
and acting like a super model sun bathing on a rock.

There was a guy near where the boat docked
who made sand-blasted wooden carvings of
sea lions and other animals that live in the ocean.

I bought a large wooden fish for my dad who was still
in the United States and I bought my mother who was
in the United States as well a dolphin
that was another one of his carvings.

I was there with my grandmother and my
step grandfather

Sam

BALD MOUNTAIN

The most beautiful place,
Bald Mountain
being on top feels like
being on top of the world.
two miles
we walk
up
and
up
and
up.
I see kayak paddles
spinning as fast as helicopter blades.
Rays of sun streak down,
the water glistens.
My nose fills with the smell
of pine
from the trees around me.
The most beautiful
place

Bald Mountain

Sunday, May 17, 2009

Turn Your writing into poetry!

Last month you wrote an essay about one of your favorite places. Recently you read three books in verse by Maria Testa. Your challenge is to turn your descriptive essay into a Maria Testa style poem by breaking up the lines, choosing your most descriptive phrases, and rearranging, changing or adding words. How poetic can you be?

Give your poem and title and sign your fist name only.