March 31, 2009
Dear Zeus,
Have you ever looked at the Acropolis in Athens? What did you think about the Athenians who planned and built the Acropolis? Well here's what I think about the architects and builders of the Acropolis. They had to have help and I bet they had help from Athena, and I would like to be the god of wisdom and the city.
I would be a good Athena because I play the trumpet. I've been playing since 5th grade, and I can play fast. I made up my own low notes. The trumpet relates to Athena because she made the trumpet.
Another way I would be a smart Athena is because I like historic cities. The way this is significant to Athena is because she's the goddess of cities. One way I like cities is that I like looking at buildings. Another way is I don't mind crowds and cities are loaded with crowds, especially historical cities.
The final way I would be a great Athena is because I like farming. This is relevant to Athena and not Demeter because Athena is the goddess of agriculture. One way I like to farm is I like organic food compared to stale supermarket food. Another way I farm is my family has a garden.
Once again the way I have great qualifications to fill in for Athena is because I play the trumpet, I like to farm, and I like looking at historical cities. Please Zeus let me fill in for Athena.
Sincerely,
Kevin
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
6 comments:
I really like the beginning of your letter. -SN
I agree with with SN. I liked the beginning of your letter. You really used persuasive writing techniques. Nice!
Mrs. Gott
I like your conclusion. We are also going to have a garden this summer. I can't wait!
Mrs. G
Dear Kevin,
Your letter is super duper awesome!
You have a really good middle, beginning, and super conclusion!
I would pick you!
From
T.L.R.
I really like when you said "One way I like to farm is I like organic food compared to stale supermarket food." I thought it was funny and a good idea.
-MST
Kevin...
Your first paragraph really drew me in and made me want to keep reading. I also loved your conclusion, I liked how you restated why you would be a good Athena.
-SNM
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