3-31-09
Dear Zeus,
I know that there must be a lot of people that want to replace your brother Poseidon but I hope you pick me because I love the ocean and all of its dwellers.
Why you should pick me is because I like all of the sea creatures. But my favorite is the shark,manta ray and the lion fish. If you pick me I could probably learn how to ride the manta ray. Yeah that's right you can ride a manta ray! Did you know that the manta ray can grow to 25 feet and weigh up to 5000 pounds? Also the sea creatures come in all shapes and sizes. Some can be up to 30 feet and some can be 5 inches.
Secondly I like to swim, if you saw me swimming at my pool you would be surprised at how good I am. My favorite place to swim is a man made lake in Scarborough. I mostly like to snorkel at the lake. I also like to swim in my pool because it is clean,warm and clear.
Lastly water covers 70% of the world and if you pick me I will keep the oceans clean by picking up any trash that someone throws into the ocean. I will stop people from hunting endangered animals like whales and sea turtles by telling them that they are killing them and if they don't listen I shall create a giant wave to send them back home. That is why I want to be Poseidon.
Sincerely,
Milos
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
9 comments:
I think you'd make a very good Poseidon, Milos. Riding a manta ray sound like fun!!
Mr. K
Really nice letter! I now know that you really do like the ocean. Out of the other Poseidon you would defiantly be in my top 3! GREAT LETTER!!!!
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T.L.R.
P.S. Nice Comment from MR.K!
Nice!!
Milos I thought that was a good letter!I also did Poseidon.Also that's cool that your favorite is a manta ray!~Jema~
That would be cool to ride a manta ray. I like your opening. K.P.
You won my vote( if we were voting:)
K.R
Interesting. It shows you know a lot about the ocean. -TM
Milos, I love your first paragraph and how you say, "I love the ocean and all of its dwellers." I also love your second paragraph and how you give so many facts about the sea creatures. It really drew me in. I like your conclusion, too, especially because you listed what you would do if Zeus picked you.
-SNM
milos
I thought you really got the concept of the letter and all the descriptive writeing I think you did a really really great goob at expressing your ideas how you are like poseidon and the ending that you wrote was magnificent. A.S p.s really good job
Milos.......
GOOD JOB!!! I never knew any of those facts about manta ray. I thought that they added more power to your letter.
-morrigan:)
p.s. I think you would make an awesome Poseidon
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