3/31/09
Dear Zeus,
Are you looking for an experienced person who will enjoy being a replacement for Ares? Well, I'm the man for the job! I have experience because I have a lot of family members who are in the military. I have an uncle in the navy, another uncle in the air-force, and a great grandfather who is a veteran of World War I. I really think I should be chosen because I am a good leader and an experienced person.
I think I am the best possible choice for Ares. I am strong like Ares, I have experience with weapons because my dad is a police officer. He has taken me to firing ranges and I have used a pistol, a shotgun. I really want to be Ares and I am more responsible than the other candidates.
I also have a dog named Ozzy. He is a German shepherd and he attacks anyone who tries to hurt me or my brother. I guess you are wondering why I am talking about my dog. Well as you know, Ares's symbol is the dog. I have also been bitten by a dog. First he bit me in the chest. And then he bit me in the back of the head as I ran away. So, I have some experience with dogs. Please consider and hopefully choose me to be Ares.
Sincerely,
Kyle
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
3 comments:
I like your opening paragraph! I didn't know you had so much family in the military.
Mrs. Gurnee
I like your first paragraph, it was very convincing!
-SNM
Kyle.....
I think you would be "the man for the job". You do have a lot of experience with war. You and Ares are a lot alike .
-morrigan:)
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