March-31-09
Dear Almighty Zeus, Ruler of the Sky, King of the Gods,
Have you ever thought that Apollo ever needed a break? Well since last week I've been thinking that maybe he does. With all his hard work driving the sun across the sky (not saying that you don't, I know you do work hard, I still think you deserve a break too but, I don't think you really want one).
Some good reasons I think I would be an awesome person to take Apollo's place for a while is because I am really accurate in the skill of archery , a camp I went to in West Virginia let me train in archery, and I hardly miss a bulls-eye.
Secondly, another excellent reason that I would be a perfect candidate for Apollo is I love math! And Apollo is a mathematician so I should probably tell you I am amazing at addition, multiplication, and fractions. Last but not least I got an......... A+ on my last quiz!!!!
Lastly, solar power is very interesting to me plus, I have a solar powered watch. Finally I created and online game 4 or so years ago that involves solar power!!! I really REALLY think you should try my game, it's very fun.
Forever under your em-powerment: Gabriel
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
5 comments:
Zeus must be really happy with how you addressed him. Very nice letter. Very cool and full of conversation. I would have no problem picking you if I were Zeus.
FROM,
T.L.R.
I think you would be a great Apollo. K.P.
You wrote a very convincing letter. Good reasons and you used the techniques of persuasive writing! Zeus should pick you.
Mrs. G.
Gabriel, your opening paragraph really drew me in. Also, the middle and end were very convincing!!! You would be a great Apollo!
-SNM
Gabriel......
I can definitely see why you would want to be Apollo! You had great details in your letter and I think Zeus should pick you.
-morrigan:)
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