March 31, 2009
Dear Zeus,
I think I would be an amazing replacement for Artemis because I love being with children, I also love walking outside in the forest, and last I think she seems to be cool because she was born on an island, where there is a forest to run in and play in. There is also a forest/piggery at the end of my street where I spend most of my time in the summer.
The first reason why I would be good to replace her would be that I love children. I like taking care of them, I love playing with them and I love making them laugh. I have a nephew who's four years old and when he laughs it makes me so happy.
The second reason why I would be good to replace Artemis is because I am really good outside for a long time. I'm good at being outside for a long time because my nephew loves to be outside in the summer time. Also there's the beautiful animals that run up and down our street. I love being in the piggery in the morning when the golden brown sun is raising. Being outside in the summer time is like being in a sound proof room.
Last but not least is reason number three. The reason why I would be a good replacement for her would be that she was born on an island where there is a forest and when she was born she helped her mother give birth to her twin brother Apollo. First I think she's cool because she's the goddess of the hunt and forest. I don't really like to go hunting but I don't mind it. Also I like being in the forest to get some quiet time. While being in the forest I like to smell the beautiful flowers and hear the amazing sounds that the gorgeous animals make. Secondly, I think she's cool because she spends all of her time outside and during the summer I spend most of my time outside. Also I've mentioned in every paragraph that my nephew loves to go outside and that I have to take care of him when he's out there if my mom doesn't feel like watching him. The last reason why I think that I would be a good replacement for Artemis is because I love to be active, like playing basketball, soccer and softball etc. and finally, I just love to run.
As you can see I would like to replace Artemis so that she can take some time off and just relax. I also think that I have some great reasons why I would be good for the job.
Sincerely,
Cassaundra
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
9 comments:
I think you would make a great replacement for Artemis. Your examples about loving the forest, being athletic and loving children are probably just what Zeus is looking for in a new Artemis. I'm impressed!
Mrs. W
I think you would make a good Artemis because you do like the out of doors and children. Your answers were very well thought out. Good luck with your new job as Artemis!
I like how you say there are beautiful animals instead of there are animals. K.P.
Excellent essay Casie. I like your reasons for being in the forest. I wish we had more woods in So Po.
Mrs. Gurnee
WOW, very long, interesting, Awesomely persuasive, and reasonable..... I like it =P
G.J.S.
Casie,
You were sooooo descriptive, I loved it. It really painted a picture in my mind. I also loved your simile: "Being outside in the summer time is like being in a sound proof room." Your whole letter was awesome!!!
-SNM
K.C !!
Ur essay is amazing. I suppose smarts runs in the family! tehe ;P I love your writing so much and I KNOW you love to be outside seeming as though ur at my house all summer in da stix!!! And taking care of children? Yeah!! That lil one is in LOVE with u! u take such good care of him. And the being active;; Psh- U NEVER SIT DOWN! lol. Ur the best and ur essay really painted a picture for me with all those descriptions :) I loved it!
PeAcE&LoVe-- A*D*J :D
Casie, your letter was really good! It sucked me right in to read more and more! like Wow! and I really like your 3rd paragraph!
Your Friend~ Shallon :D
Casie.......
This letter was really good (and long to). It was full of details for why you should be Artemis. My favorite detail is when you talk about how you were born on an island, I thought that was pretty cool!
-morrigan:)
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