Yankee Stadium
Feeling
When you walk in it's like magic.
It's like boom, the smell of hot dogs
And peanuts.
It was not like any ballpark.
It was Yankee Stadium.
This was not a dream.
It was more.
The Game
Every crack of the bat was like
Music. The people around me
were from different states.
They came just to see a game.
Memories
When I left I thought back to
Reality. Also I left with memories.
Like the final score 8 – 2.
My favorite player hitting a home run,
But most of all I went to the game.
Gone
Now Yankee Stadium is gone.
The last game there was a special one.
The Yankees won on a special night
That celebrates their history.
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
17 comments:
Your poem is so good that I just had to keep reading it
Chandler
Great Job Taylor, I can smell the hot dogs from here!
Kyle
You wrote in a very nice style a style that is like the poems we read in class.
T.r.m
good job it sounds really gooooooooood
anthony
Taylor, I like the way you described being in Yankee Stadium as "more than a dream." You are clearly a Yankees fan!
I can hear the sound when you write "the crack of the bat was like music." This is a wonderful poem!
Mrs. W
Dear Taylor I really like all the descripteive words you used I really want to go there know
From Lillian.
Taylor I thought the part that said, "boom the smell of hotdogs" and the "crack of the bat" was very creative.-Tai
Taylor your poem made me kind of sad that the Yankee Stadium is gone because of all those great games that were held there. -Casie H.
Dear Taylor,
One word...WOW!!!!!!!GREAT POEM i love all the good choice of words. OUTSTANDING I could go one forever!
GREAT!
I felt like I was there!
From,
Trenton
Taylor, your first paragraph is awesome! It is so descriptive and poetic. It made me want to keep reading. I love how you compare the crack of the bat to music. I like your last line, "That celebrates their history." It ends your poem really well. I also like how you labeled each paragraph starting with Feeling, The game, etc. You did a fantastic Job! I was upset when it was over.
-Sarah
Taylor I have never been to a baseball game before but I can really see and smell the way that game at Yankee Stadium must have been.You used some very good descriptive language!
Jema
I can smell the hot dogs and peanuts from here. nice poem
Kevin
dear taylor I have all ways wanted to see the Yankee Stadium even though I like the RED SOX. But because of your awesome description of Yankee Stadium I know what it is like. I like some of your facts like now Yankee Stadium is gone. GRAET JOB TAYLOR
SEAN
oh my oh my this almost took my breath away! This flowed very good
Taylor......
I really enjoyed reading your poem. My favorite part f your poem is when you said "This was not a dream. It was more." I thought that, that was very deep and thoughtful.
GREAT JOB TAYLOR!!!!
- Morrigan :)
That was awsome I liked how you compared music to the crack of a bat
Brittanie!!
Awesome poem!! Job well done! I was sad when it was over! P.s. Go Sox! (:
-Super Shallon :D
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