Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Tai

The Island

One of my favorite places is next to an island
in the Pacific ocean in Mexico
with hundreds of colorful fish
many giant starfish
lots of stingrays
cruising along the ocean depth.

Divers deep down under the water with little
schools of fish cruising along near them.
The giant starfish were indigo with orange spikes
there were sunfish with yellow stripes.

And there was a sea-lion who was doing poses
and acting like a super model sun bathing on a rock.

There was a guy near where the boat docked
who made sand-blasted wooden carvings of
sea lions and other animals that live in the ocean.

I bought a large wooden fish for my dad who was still
in the United States and I bought my mother who was
in the United States as well a dolphin
that was another one of his carvings.

I was there with my grandmother and my
step grandfather

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like the way you described the sea-lion who was "doing poses and acting like a super model." I can imagine what that must have looked like. Your description of the colorful fish and the many types of fish make me want to go there. This is a beautiful poem Tai. Way to go!
~Mrs. W

Anonymous said...

Tai, your first paragraph was very well written, it made me want to keep reading. I love how you said the sea-lion was doing poses and acting like a super model. The description of the fish was really good, it makes me want to see them, and the sea-lion. The wood carvings sound really cool! Good Job!!

Anonymous said...

I can think of the fish.Nice poem.
Kevin

Anonymous said...

Tai it sounds like you have loads of fun off an island in mexico. I like how you discribe mexico and all the fish

SEAN

Anonymous said...

I'd like to see that sea lion!good poem Tai.

Anonymous said...

tai the island souds like a grea place to go with all the colerd fish. anthony

Anonymous said...

Tai.........
I like when you said "hundreds of colorful fish many giant starfish lots of stingrays cruising along the ocean depth." Now i have a great picture in my mind!

-Morrigan :)

Anonymous said...

That was a very detailed poem Tai. Ilked how you compared a fish to a modelIt was very good

Brittanie

Anonymous said...

Tai your poem was very descriptive and really good!Stingrays are my favorite ocean animals!!
Jema

Anonymous said...

Your poem really flowed and you described all the animals really well.
-Sophie