The Island
One of my favorite places is next to an island
in the Pacific ocean in Mexico
with hundreds of colorful fish
many giant starfish
lots of stingrays
cruising along the ocean depth.
Divers deep down under the water with little
schools of fish cruising along near them.
The giant starfish were indigo with orange spikes
there were sunfish with yellow stripes.
And there was a sea-lion who was doing poses
and acting like a super model sun bathing on a rock.
There was a guy near where the boat docked
who made sand-blasted wooden carvings of
sea lions and other animals that live in the ocean.
I bought a large wooden fish for my dad who was still
in the United States and I bought my mother who was
in the United States as well a dolphin
that was another one of his carvings.
I was there with my grandmother and my
step grandfather
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
10 comments:
I like the way you described the sea-lion who was "doing poses and acting like a super model." I can imagine what that must have looked like. Your description of the colorful fish and the many types of fish make me want to go there. This is a beautiful poem Tai. Way to go!
~Mrs. W
Tai, your first paragraph was very well written, it made me want to keep reading. I love how you said the sea-lion was doing poses and acting like a super model. The description of the fish was really good, it makes me want to see them, and the sea-lion. The wood carvings sound really cool! Good Job!!
I can think of the fish.Nice poem.
Kevin
Tai it sounds like you have loads of fun off an island in mexico. I like how you discribe mexico and all the fish
SEAN
I'd like to see that sea lion!good poem Tai.
tai the island souds like a grea place to go with all the colerd fish. anthony
Tai.........
I like when you said "hundreds of colorful fish many giant starfish lots of stingrays cruising along the ocean depth." Now i have a great picture in my mind!
-Morrigan :)
That was a very detailed poem Tai. Ilked how you compared a fish to a modelIt was very good
Brittanie
Tai your poem was very descriptive and really good!Stingrays are my favorite ocean animals!!
Jema
Your poem really flowed and you described all the animals really well.
-Sophie
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