Chebeague Island
The land of relaxation
Huge trees, Small trees
swaying
in the ocean breeze
Pine, Oak, Maple, Birch
are some
of the trees living on this
ocean perch
The ocean swells and sails
on one of its many gales
this helps me see
this is the place to
Be
Miles of wooded island, low cut grass
white pine house
Black shuddered windows
This is the place to
Be
Two skylights look up high
letting in the light of
the cloudless sky
this is the place to
Be
This is my house
on this island
And out of all the world's
space
this
is my favorite
place
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
14 comments:
I like the way you describes the trees and the swaying ocean breeze
Milos
Thanks Milos I really like your comment!
TRENTON
It looks like you spent a lot of time on this poem and it came out really really good
anthony
Trenton, I liked that your poem rhymed. It sounds like a nice place to be. -Tai
Thank you all for the wonderful comments !!!!!!!!
Trenton
your poem was a remarkable discovery
chandler
Trenton, I love how it rhymes!! It's awesome! I like how you describe the trees and how you repeat, "this is the place to be." You described the white pine house really well, I could definitely picture it. Lastly, I love how you say, "Out of all the world's space this is my favorite place."
Your whole poem was extremely creative. Awesome Job!!!!!!
-Sarah
I can think of the island in the summer it sounds better than November.
Kevin
dear Treton I bet you have a blast on chebeage island
wiht all the relaxation
GREAT THINKING TRENTON
SEAN
Trenton.......
First of all, I love how it rhymes. It sounds SOOOOO cool!!!!!!!!!!Also I really like how you describe the trees and almost always end the line with "this is the place to be."
YOUR POEM IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!
- Morigan :)
That was a very detailed poem trenton I liked how you started your poem with, The land of relaxation. That was cool considering it sounds relaxing.
Brittanie :>
Trenton I like the way your poem rhymes!!It sounds like that island is a really fun place to be!!You must look forward to going their again!!
Jema
I really liked how you said "this is the place to be" after you described a few of the paragraphs. -Sophie
awesome poem I love it you really know how to pull the reader into the story. I think you should be a writer.
trm
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