In The Woods
In the woods,
During Autumn,
my favorite place.
The
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
leaves
Like confetti at a birthday party.
All over the trees
and the ground
there is
Red
Brown
Orange
Yellow
My favorite place
The birds singing,
The squirrels scampering,
The mosquitoes sucking your blood
My favorite place
The hard ground
beneath
your feet
Then.
Rain.
Mud.
Mushy Mushy Mud.
soaking through your shoes
and socks
Rain.
Mud.
Trees.
Leaves.
The Woods
My Favorite Place
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
15 comments:
Morrigan, it was cool how you wrote the word falling. And how you said the leaves were like confetti. -Tai
Good job on your poem I really liked it.
chandler
Morrigan, I loved how you wrote falling, and compared the leaves to confetti at a birthday party. Also, I like how you wrote red, brown, orange, yellow. You did something different instead of writing it all the same way. I also like how you said the squirrels were scampering. It is such a fun and exciting word. Lastly, I like how you repeated at the end. Your whole poem was FANTABULOUS!!!
-Sarah
Morrigan I really liked your simile I can see the leaves in my head. I also loved how you described the animals, and what they are doing.
-Sophie
Morrigan I thought that it was a beautiful poem I loved the descriptions of the leaves. I love it!!-Casie H.
This is a very detailed poem.I like how you said the leaves look like confetti on the ground and you describe the colors of the leaves
Brittanie
Morrigan I really like your simile "The falling leaves like confetti at a birthday party".Your poem was very descriptive!!
Jema
I can picture the woods. nice poem
Kevin
Dear Morrigan I loved your simile and the way you said falling that was really cool great job
Sincerly Lillian
dear Morrigan "falling leaves like confetti is just outstanding simily. I can realy picture the woods. I love the superb dascrtive words like Scampering,and mushy mushy mud.
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!
SEAN
I like the way you typed falling it was great!
Milos
THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR THE WONDERFUL COMMENTS YOU MADE ON MY POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- Morrigan :D
I like your simile about leaves.
Kyle
Dear Morrigan,
You did awsome. You used some amazing figurative language/similie. The way you repeated "My favorite place" reminded me of how Maria Testa wrote her poems. I was sad when it was over.
Sincerely,
Samantha :-)
I like the dicripitive writing in this poem cause it brought your inner maria testa.
taylor
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