Northern Maine
Trees as far as the eye
can see,
green like
Easter grass.
Maple,
pine and
oak trees
everywhere.
My nose
is clogged with the smell of balsam.
Tons of
moose,
deer,
and chipmunks.
cool crisp breeze
rustling through
the bright green
maple leaves
Northern Maine
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
15 comments:
That was a very good description of northern maine.
Taylor
I think You did a really good job on this
chandler
Kevin, I like your description. I would like to hear more about this place. -Tai
Kevin, I like how you compared the green trees to Easter grass, it was a very creative simile. Your last paragraph was sooo descriptive. It was very easy to picture it. Great Job!!
-Sarah
I liked how you compared the green was like Easter grass.
-Sophie
Kevin, I thought it was nice. I liked the way you described the trees.-Casie H.
Kevin I can really picture how green the grass is by your description!
Jema
kevin bye reading your letter I can see that you really like northern maine
dear kevin I like how you compare green grass as to easter grass. I also like how you discribe the wind and how it rustls through the leaves.
GRAET JOB KEVIN
SEAN
you did a very good job on this. I can tell you like northern Maine.
Milos
Kevin........
I could really imagine the cool crisp breeze and the maple, pine and oak trees.
-Morrigan :)
I like how you compared trees to easter grass. I also like how you talked about all the animls
Brittanie:>
oh Kevin I almost forgot...
SIMILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(green like Easter grass.)
and...
ALLITERATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(cool crisp breeze.)
- Morrigan :D
Nice job describing the animals and plants.
Kyle
I like how you described all the trees and animals!
-Super Shallon :D
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