My Favorite Place
My cousin's house
near the woods
the smell of pine surrounds it like clouds surround the sun
light blue with black shutters
My cousin's their names are Macey and Morgan
when I go there I like to hang out with Morgan
my mom says Morgan and I are like two peas in a pod
Macey play with my little sister Bryanna
My cousin's house
out in Limington,the country
where my mom and her two brothers grew up
My cousin's house
the cousins which I know
best out of all I have
the ones who I can't forget
the best cousins
I could ever ask for
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
10 comments:
I like how you start each sentence with "my cousin's house". I can picture the smells. I like the simile.
Kevin
Jema, I liked the part "the smell of pine surrounds it like clouds surround the sun." -Tai
Jema, I like the simile, "the smell of pine surrounds it like clouds surround the sun." I thought that was very creative. Your last paragraph shows how much you like to be with your cousins.
-Sarah
Jema, it was nice how you wrote about your cousins in this it was really nice. I also liked your simile.
Sophie
jema your cousins house seems like a cool place anthony
dear jema I like the idiom you used "to peas in a pod"
I realy like how you talk about your cousins.
GREAT JOB JEMA
SEAN
you were very descriptive in your great poem.
Milos
Jema.......
I can picture your cousin's house in my mind. It sounds like a fun place to be.
- Morrigan :)
This was a very detailed poem. I like how you wrote about the light blue with black shutters. That was cool
Brittanie:>
You must really like your cousins.
Kyle
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