My Favorite Place
My favorite place
is a park in Florida.
My favorite place
is where I first
learned
to walk.
Close to the
ocean that looked like
the cloudless sky.
My favorite place
has amazing sunflowers,
roses,
and an amazing pond.
My favorite place has
grass
the shade of emerald green
My favorite place has
butterflies the colors of
orange, blue, yellow
and even purple
My favorite place
A park in Florida
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
11 comments:
I can picture all of the butterflies. And the sky.
Kevin
Gabriel, the colors of the butterflies and the sea were very descriptive. -Tai
Gabriel, I like how you repeat "My favorite place" and I like how your
second paragraph flows. I love how you describe the grass as emerald green, and give examples of the colors of the butterflies. It was really good!! Can you remember what the name of the park is?
-Sarah
Gabriel that is really cool that your favorite place is where you learned to walk!!That place must be very special to you!!
Jema
dear Gabriel I like how you tell the reader what you can find inthe park or what you are to espect. Amazing Job GABRIEL
SEAN
Very good poem.Do you know what the park was called?
Gabriel.........
My favorite part is when you said "Close to the ocean that looked like the cloudless sky." That is a really cool simile!!!!!!
- Morrigan :)
gabrial the florida park sounds so cool the way you describe it for example amazing sunflowers roses ponds and so much more Great job. anthony
The was a very deailed poem i liked how you said that it was the place you learened how to walk at.
Brittanie:>
Great descriptions Gabriel.
Kyle
when you begin this poem you had to like go back to that park in florida and you captured the detail.
taylor
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