Six Flags
The best place I have ever been to
is six flags
They have a roller coaster
called the
Superman
I did not go on the ride because I was a little scared
of how high it was
The roller coaster had 5 separate coasters and
they all were red
and blue
All 5 coasters had a red cape on the back of each one
with a warning sign on the back
of it
Six Flags
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
13 comments:
I like the detail in your description of the roller coaster. Six Flags sounds like a great place to be.
Mrs. W
Dear Chandler I like the description you put in about the roller coaster it sounds like a great place to go to have fun
from Lillian
That sounds really fun. -Tai
Chandler, I went on that ride once and you described it perfectly.
-Casie H.
Chandler, it is very descriptive and lets you picture it in your mind. I liked how you left a space above and below Superman, it emphasizes how important it is to your poem.
-Sarah
Chandler, how you explained your poem was very descriptive like how you explained the superman.
-Sophie
Chandler that sounds like a really cool ride!You described it really well and it seems like you had really fun at six flags!!
Jema
The super man sounds fun. nice poem
Kevin
dear chandler you make six flags sound like a lot of fun. were is it???
SEAN WYMAN
This sound like a very fun place. I would like to go there sometime!
Milos
Chandler...............
That was a great poem. Six Flags sounds like a fun place but I would be to chicken to go on the Superman.
- Morrigan :)
I like how you described the color of each coaster. What did the warning sign say?
Kyle
Six Flags sounds like a fun place to be!
-Super Shallon :D
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