My Favorite Place
Disney World
is like a
dream
the pool at my hotel
is like the shape of
a guitar.
At Disney World
there are
fast rides
the Rockin' Roller Coaster
Tower of Terror
Test Track.
They are awesome and scary
They go so fast.
I feel excited.
I want to go back
someday
to Disney World.
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
15 comments:
Casie
I LOVE the test test track i just wish it was longer. I can relate about how awesome Disney world is.
I loved your poem!
Trenton
I can picture this. I like the simile.
Kevin
amazing a work of art!!!!! Sophie
I love your poem so much!!! Sophie
Casie, the rides sound fun and really exciting. -Tai
I like the way you mentioned the name of some rides. You mentioned more then just rides too. Very well done............G
that sounds really fun to do
Casie, I like the simile, "the pool at my hotel is like the shape of a guitar." I also like how you listed some of the fast rides in the second paragraph. Your poem flows so well, it was awesome.
-Sarah
Casie I liked the way you described the pool.I can picture it in my head!
Jema
Dear Casey I like the deatail you put in for example when you were talking about the roller coaster and the rides awesome job.
Sincerly Lillian
dear casie I have all ways wanted to go to Disney world. Because of this poem it makes me even more eager to go espeacialy When you named the rides they sound like a whole lot of fun.
GREAT JOB CASIE
SEAN
I like how you described the rides
Milos
Cassie................
I like you poem because of all of the details you gave about your hotel and the rides. Oh, and if you do go back to Disney World you need to take me with you! Hehehe!
- Morrigan :)
I like your poem! I haven't been to Disney World since I was a Baby, and I really don't remember anything from there! You described it very well!
-Super Shallon :)
I like how you listed some of the rides.
Kyle
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