Kentucky
The fields are covered in golden wheat
and corn stocks
The leaves
are razor sharp
Corn fields are so long
like a blanket across the fields.
Lakes
something great about Kentucky
is the canoeing
swimming snorkeling
never ending fun.
Cow ants
Black and orange like Halloween
vibrating in you hand
As big as a quarter
Harmless yet so deadly.
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
11 comments:
I've never seen a cow ant but now I can picture one and know the size. I like the similes.
Kevin
Brittanie, that sounds like a nice place to visit. -Tai
great similes and I have also seen a cow
chandler
Brittanie, your first paragraph really described Kentucky, and let me picture it in my mind. I like how your second paragraph flows. There's a lot of things to do, it sounds like fun. I like how you said the cow ants are black and orange like Halloween. It is really interesting that they vibrate in your hand, but I can't imagine picking up an ant the size of a quarter. Great Job!!!
-Sarah
Brittanie I can really picture how Kentucky must look like in my mind!!!Like the golden fields of wheat and corn stocks.I can picture the cow ants also!!
Jema
dear britt I like the discriptive words you used
like razor,Vibrating and harmless. Cow ants sound creepy.
OUTSTANDING JOB BRITT
SEAN
Cool poem. I did not know that ants come in orange!
Milos
Britt.......
Kentucky sounds like a beautiful place. I would love to go there.
- Morrigan :)
brittanie I can see that you love kentucky the you descibe it for example the fields are coverd in golden wheat and never ending fun like swimming canoeing that makes me want to go there great job. anthony
I really liked your simile it it was a good description of the fields. -Sophie
What are cow ants?
\Kyle
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