Step falls
My favorite place in the whole wide world
near Bethel
off a dirt road
that’s the entrance.
As you climb you are in the deep Maine woods
full of the smell
of fresh pine
decaying leaves
musty air
damp environment.
Waterfalls
the closer we get
the more they echo in our ears even louder
boulders cutting down the mountain
water pooling down
faster and faster
till it hits the ground.
Step falls
like Fun Town- Splash Town only natural
waterfalls
rock slides
deep pools
kids paradise
step falls!
Persuade Zeus
17 years ago
9 comments:
Anthony,
I like the way you describe the smell of the fresh pine and decaying leaves. I can hear the echo of waterfalls in my ears!
Mrs. W
I really liked your description of the waterfall because you could hear it in your head and see it. -Sophie
I like how you described the smell of the woods.
Kyle
This poem is very well written! I like how you compared Step Falls to Funtown-Splashtown! It sounds like fun there!
-Super Shallon :D
This is a very good poem, I like how you described the smells of the pine and decaying leaves
Milos
Anthony, your first paragraph made me want to keep reading, it flows really well. I love your second paragraph and how you list the things you can smell. The third paragraph really let me picture Step Falls. It is so poetic, it made me think of Maria Testa. I love how you say "like Fun Town-Splash Town only natural" in the last paragraph. Then you listed some of the natural things and said it is a "kids paradise." That was very creative, and so was the rest of your poem. I loved it! You did a Great Job!!
-Sarah:)
I can smell the pine. I like the comparsion between steep falls and Fun Town- SplashTown.
Kevin
Dear Anthony,
Sounds like a lot fun. You were very descriptive about all of the experiences you had!
Trenton
hey salce awesome poem great discription -WILL :D
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